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    Ignorant Surrender

    Rainkyusen
    Rainkyusen


    Posts : 38
    Join date : 2013-01-14

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    Post by Rainkyusen Thu Jan 17, 2013 11:39 am

    Why does my heart cry?

    Flowing rivers from its eyes

    These feelings that I cannot fight

    Overcome me all the time


    And every night awake in bed

    Filled to the brim with read

    The thought of you fills my head

    Oh girl I must move on


    As my mind contemplates

    The jealousy, it just elates

    The opposition tries to debate

    But it doesn’t work, it closed its gates


    But hope is on the horizon you see

    For there can be a brand new me

    My soul can again be free

    Oh girl I must move on


    And as these feelings try to show

    My heart, as its slave, will follow

    The tempting thoughts deep below

    But in my heart I will not go


    You are the day I want to seize

    You are the shaking in my knee’s

    When I’m with you time seemed to freeze

    Oh please let me move on


    Through time and space I will stumble

    Actuality and emotions jumbled

    But through all this is must stay humble

    Girl I will move on!


    I’m getting closer to my prize

    The time is here for the sunrise

    I see my life in a new size

    Oh girl I think I moved on


    It’s been a while since we’ve met

    But my old friend please don’t fret

    Tomorrow I will board a jet

    And to you I’ll go


    Maybe it’s a big mistake

    A whole lot of guts this shall take

    But in front of you I won’t be fake

    I’ll show you I’ve moved on


    I get off the jet and meet your gaze

    Everything else fades to haze

    I hate myself for nothing has changed

    O girl I can’t move on



    I wrote this one a while ago and its not one of my favorites but I do think its interesting to analyze the mindset behind the actions the character takes and how you can easily predict where it is going but he can't or maybe he can and chooses to ignore it. Run-on's FTW!

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