This is a short story I wrote for a high school writing class. The assignment was to describe an emotion in less than 200 words; and being the dark, brooding person I am, I chose hatred. I received the highest possible grade/score in the class for it, so needless to say I've pretty proud of it. The story is a take off a scene from the anime Neon Genesis Evangelion between Asuka and Rei, from Asuka's point of view. Some of the wording is inspired by Radiohead songs ('Karma Police' and 'Kid A' for those interested). Hope you enjoy reading it as much as I did writing it.
The Elevator
I walked in, leaning my back against the wall; her back to me. The elevator door closed to my side, and started its ascent. I was so angry, so helpless. I hated everything, I hated myself, I hated her. She didn’t look at me, and I tried to do the same, but I hated her, I couldn’t stop. She started talking, but I didn’t listen, I didn’t want to listen, I hated her. She didn’t turn around, only moved her head, to see me in the corner of her eye. She was a doll, nothing but a toy. I hated her. Her skin was like porcelain, and her hair was of fabric. As I stared at her, I could almost see the strings tied around her limbs, and when she spoke, I wondered where her ventriloquist was hiding. I hated her. I hated everything. I hated breathing the air she breathed, and using the elevator she used. I hated everything, I hated my mama, I hated myself. But I hated her most. She stopped talking, and I couldn’t take her anymore. I walked over to her, raising my hand. SLAP!! For a minute there, I saw her face crack, and I looked into her marble eyes. I saw nothing, only my own hatred.
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